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This blog has gone through some changes over the years, but since I have taken it over I have tried to keep you informed in the subjects that interest me and you both. Now that I have completed a final edit on MADDIE & MOOK AND THE MESSAGE IN THE BOTTLE, I invite you on the journey to the finale which will hopefully be a book contract and a published childrens book. I welcome any and all constructive comments, and look forward to taking you on this journey with me.

Something That Happened One Fourth Of July

It's been tough lately, so tough in fact that I am frustrated in my writing. I am not the type of writer who can dictate my words to someone else, but in this case I have to. As I speak, my wife is typing this up for me. I had shoulder surgery recently and it hurts a lot. In most positions I try to keep my arm it still aches or burns or feels like someone is slicing a knife up and down the flesh and bone of my arm. So I finally broke down and asked her to type this introduction for me so that I may at least try to get something posted.


It's another Independence Day for America. I am proud, there is no doubt. I wish I was able to put the pain meds away and enjoy the day, but that is not going to happen. For now they are necessary. Instead, I will share a little poem I wrote several years back that reminds me of some of the things I like to do on the Fourth Of July. I hope you enjoy it.

Steak On The Grill

Which way does it go, up or down?
Look at in one way, it spins round and round.
Playing in my head, till I lose control.
Losing balance, just can’t keep hold.

Colors psychedelic, like I’m on a trip.
Shapes bend to others, as they slide and slip.
Twisting, turning every which way.
My mind knows the words that my lips can’t say.

Shouldn’t have eaten that mushroom, didn’t taste too nice.

Growing in the backyard, my mind is frosted ice.
It made my stomach wretch, before I began to fly.
Now I feel real happy, ain’t no reason why.

My mind is on a trip, ain’t no end in sight.
That tiny little mushroom began this hippy trippy flight.
Wouldn’t be so bad if I could find my way,
That’s the last time I put mushrooms from the backyard on my steak

The colors just keep spinning, it’s a crazy little trip.
I guess I really don’t mind, it feels like such a rip.
I hope it all slows down soon, so I can get a break.
I have the munchies, they’re getting strong,
I want to eat that steak!
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